Originally posted by Mr_Trek:I can post them here if you want?
Somebody to save my heart:
I'm sitting here in a lonely room,
waiting for you to save my heart
If you don't come here and save my heart,
what will happen to me?
I want somebody to save my heart
I need somebody to save my heart
There's only one who could save my heart
That somebody who could save my heart
That somebody is you
I'm stuck here
In a land of oblivion
I'm trying not to remember
what's on the other side of that wall
Trying to forget
the light... of love
I'm trying to get up but these chains
have me down on my knees
You are the person
with the key
The key to life
for me
I want somebody to save my heart
I need somebody to save my heart
There's only one who could save my heart
That somebody who could save my heart
That somebody is you
There is no other
way out of this place
The only way out of this
place is through you
I want somebody to save my heart
I need somebody to save my heart
There's only one who could save my heart
That somebody who could save my heart
That somebody is you
I'll be saved
I was there in a corner
with heavy ropes tied around me
I shouted and you responded
You tied up my knots and
You free me and take me to another place
A better place!
You touch me and my heart and I'm in that
Other place!
You and your endless grace
It moves in such beautiful ways
Wherever you go
You make it better
You're like a cloud of love
A wind blows and you're there
In that cloud I feel like a drop of love
I wanna bump into you and merge into one
You free me and take me to another place
A better place!
You touch me and my heart and I'm in that
Other place!
Originally posted by drewhiggins:I like them. The second is the best one - probably best to leave it though given it's so short and works just as that. Adding any more would really just bloat it up.
Originally posted by drewhiggins:That's exactly how it's seeming to work. So far this has gone from what a week in hell (literally) might be like to buskers and lonely people surviving their days.
Nobody in sight and nary a bump in the night
Hardly any noise 'cept for a busker with no well-earned applause
The bricks were still and the movement was nil
Wind absent and the warmth heaven-sent
Friend and friend, uninterested in the night's end
Sounds of arriving feet, the few left to (not sure what I can put here)
One lonely soul singing to survive with his money bowl
Looking to sing another day, through another day
Sing for the moment, sing for the soul, sing to achieve his goal
Of that he just can't fathom just one more day of famine
A young child, lost on the street corner, miles away from her home
Lost and so alone, broken and aching, cold and shaken
This child weeps all the unaware city sleeps
In their own dreams.
Originally posted by drewhiggins:It's just a first lyric, so it's nothing amazing yet. I'll keep going back to it and coming up with ideas.
I have an idea from last week that I want to write on.