1. This is more a poem granted, but there ya go.


    I feel I'm young but I'm missing out on youth.
    Having some fun thing to do, and someone's groove to pursue

    I don't want to sit in wait, how can I at this age?
    When you want to show the world all your love, or make it fear your rage.

    I feel many's a contradiction, in this post hormonal time of friction
    But as I reclaim my sharpened sense of diction, I just want to have fun.

    And fun, may I stress, is to your diress not something that needs to leap forward
    from a bottle.

    Give me a crew, or at least one or two
    Who have the space to think and dream, as I do.

    Give me a girl, with hair that's pink or blue
    And I'll sing an entranced tune!
    For I am young, I am young, I have remembered!
  2. Originally posted by U2Nick:[..]

    Haha, excellent. I just want to make sure; when you added the files to your iTunes library, was all of the info and album artwork already there? Thanks again for downloading it.


    yup, it was all there
  3. Originally posted by Macphistfly:This is more a poem granted, but there ya go.


    I feel I'm young but I'm missing out on youth.
    Having some fun thing to do, and someone's groove to pursue

    I don't want to sit in wait, how can I at this age?
    When you want to show the world all your love, or make it fear your rage.

    I feel many's a contradiction, in this post hormonal time of friction
    But as I reclaim my sharpened sense of diction, I just want to have fun.

    And fun, may I stress, is to your diress not something that needs to leap forward
    from a bottle.

    Give me a crew, or at least one or two
    Who have the space to think and dream, as I do.

    Give me a girl, with hair that's pink or blue
    And I'll sing an entranced tune!
    For I am young, I am young, I have remembered!


    I remember writing a poem almost identical to this last year in my English class! It's a shame that I threw out the binder that contained it, I would have loved to show the scary similarities lol. Your poem is definitely better though, because of the line that I put in bold.
  4. I've been pretty silent around here lately, but I can guarantee I've got more stuff coming...

    You guys are really cranking out some awesome stuff, setting the bar high. That's the biggest benefit of this thread, I think, is being motivated by the other great lyrics to produce even greater work- we all bounce off each other so well
  5. Originally posted by EyesWithPrideB3:I've been pretty silent around here lately, but I can guarantee I've got more stuff coming...

    You guys are really cranking out some awesome stuff, setting the bar high. That's the biggest benefit of this thread, I think, is being motivated by the other great lyrics to produce even greater work- we all bounce off each other so well


    Can't wait for some new stuff Matt!



    I got the idea for some chords last night, so I quickly played them out and wrote them down before I went to bed. So, this morning I decided to do something with them in Guitar Pro with them. It took on a life of it's own and I can't wait to sit down and write lyrics for the song (right now my sister is home with the television and whatever else on). Anyway, here is the midi file which can be played in Windows Media Player. Really basic organ background, some echo arpeggios and a text book drum beat for right now lol. (Right now, it sounds like Moment Of Surrender featuring Matt Bellamy lol.)

    bit of an updated version:
    http://www.mediafire.com/?47vgh2dd9hdahtu
  6. I've been requested by a label!

    What the fuck do I send them as an example of songwriting!
    Quick!
  7. ....Seriously Cal, that's ridiculously awesome. Any of the songs on your Myspace page would be amazing samples, those all blew my mind.

    Congratulations, friend. That's spectacular


  8. CAL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    I would agree with Matt, anything from your MySpace page would do the trick.

    So proud!!!!!!!

    Just out of curiosity, which label is it?
  9. It's for my songwriting, but it could be all-inclusive.

    Fuck me.
  10. Singer-songwriter here.

    I have a VERY U2 inspired song on my MySpace, entitled "The First Time" (no relation to the Zooropa track). Check it out here: www.myspace.com/droorogers