Could you folks give a lad some lyrical opinions?

Originally posted by MacphistflyHey guys, this is the first time i've got the chance to tell you this but in the past few months i've decided listening to U2 is not enough, so i've gotten off of my ass and wrote a whole pile of lyrics in preparation for my band in Los Angeles (a half Irish/ half American band)

I'm not ready to Unveil the name publicly yet, but i would like some of your assistances in giving me your views on my lyrical work and guitar tracks/patterns, as to make them fitting both to the idea in my head and the U2 fanbase.

Hearing Coldplay, i feel to myself they're good, but yeah, i can do better

So i should be jamming away soon, recording Demo's next week, so be sure to let me know what you guys think.


Slainte

Hearing Coldplay, i feel to myself they're good, but yeah, i can do better

Originally posted by LikeASong[..]Fantastic stuff, I'm ready for the laughing gas Just kidding. Share some lyrics, you'll have honest and sincere feedback (at least from my side). [..]I am VERY sure you can do it better... Even I can do better than Coldplay

Originally posted by MacphistflyHaha i'm a politics, history, english lit, and poetry and above all Acting student with highest marks on improv, if my lyrics are bad i should just become a plummer now.

p.s nice pic of you with the guitar LikeASong, i'd kill for those legs

Originally posted by MacStripeyyeah share the lyrics, I'm curious now

Originally posted by MacphistflyI shall PM you them, i'm not ready to share em in the wide open just yet.
But i did get them copyrighted last week, so the whole process is in full swing.

Originally posted by LikeASong[..]Fantastic! I'm waiting for that PM then... And i promise I won't sprerad them


PS. You will probably receive a PM of mine asking for the meaning of some weird word

Originally posted by MacphistflyWell they are copyrighted in their present and future forms so if you did i'd sue your ass and i'd have two lovely Spanish guitars

Originally posted by LikeASong[..]xDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD

Originally posted by Macphistfly[..]

Well they are copyrighted in their present and future forms so if you did i'd sue your ass and i'd have two lovely Spanish guitars