Monday morning
Nineteen years of dawning
I say how long
I say how long
It was one dull morning
Woke the world with bawling
I was so sad / So sad
They were so glad
I was of a feeling it was out of control
I had the opinion it was out of control
Boys and girls
Go to school and those
Remain children
But not this one
I was of a feeling it was out of control
I had the opinion it was out of control
I was of a feeling it was out of control
I had the opinion it was out of control
(You take my heart away)
Out of control
Out of control
Out of control
Out of control
Out of control
I fought fate
There's blood on the garden gate
The man said childhood
It's in his childhood
One day I'll die
The choice will not be mine
Will it be too late
You can't fight fate
I was of a feeling it was out of control
I had the opinion it was out of control
Originally posted by hawkmoon_269:Thats alright young man thats alright......your mighty young to be writing such heavy lyrics![]()
Originally posted by dieder:Great lyrics if you ask me...especially at that age
I also tried to write lyrics and this was the first one I've recently finished:
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I think it sounds like some kind of U2-song...
But anyway, on a serious note: I sometimes have some lines in my head, but I never write them down. Maybe if I start playing guitar (which I will be soon)
Originally posted by U2Nick:I haven't done a lot of writing since... August? Sounds about right. Tonight, I broke the dry spell. I only wrote down titles, ones that I would like to use and others that are "maybes." I also wrote a small synth thing, it would be a great track to open a show as the band and I walk on stage.![]()
My favorites from Tonight include; "NGC 4945," "Universe Surrounded By White Walls" and "Clock Controller." A few other song titles I like from before this session are "God's Hiatus," "Life Sized Action Man" and "Cowboy Thing."
"NGC 4945" is going to be a Symphony that I cannot wait to complete! I was supposed to "officially" start it this evening, but a much needed chat with my best friend got in the way. I have several ideas lined up for it. "God's Hiatus" is the most complete song that the band and I have. I want to re-write the lyrics however... are you really still reading this?
Some of my ideas can be found on my YouTube page, if anyone is interested.
http://www.youtube.com/user/Quiggs94
By the way, the band is called "Impetus."
Originally posted by EyesWithPrideB3:[..]
"God's Hiatus" is one of those song titles on an album that I would have to check out FIRST, and THEN listen to the album as a whole. Wayyyy too appealing to wait any longer than I had to for.
Originally posted by Andrew_C:it would be cool if we made a song on here, like everyone records a little part, then someone mixes it together![]()