1. Originally posted by EyesWithPrideB3:[..]

    Write what you know. The best stuff that I've ever written has been the stuff I've believed in, about emotions I was either struggling with, enjoying to their limits, or digging up from my past. I've never written a single song that doesn't have personal significance to me that I actually was confident in in the end.

    I always used to try to put myself in these scenarios, like daydreams in my head, and make a song out of that, and it just never came across as convincing and as powerful as the things that had really happened, whether they were as interesting as the scenarios or not.

    Perfect example:

    Today I wrote a song (almost entirely done, still needs some tweaks) about this one single solitary MOMENT of my day, where I leave a particular class and walk up a flight of stairs, and there's a few seconds where me and the same girl make eye contact every single day, and then we both just walk on. Wrote an entire song. About that one moment.

    In my head, there would be so much more to that story- I'd dream up us finally meeting, some sort of exchange, perhaps a downer-ending with a bit of an optimistic twist....but instead, ALL I wrote about was this one minute of my day-to-day life, and how I feel about it every day. And yeah, it's a little cheesy because it gets slightly over-detailed here and there, but I'm becoming very happy with it. I'll bring my notebook home tomorrow and share the lyrics.

    EDIT: Forgot to mention she's beautiful.


    everytime i try to write a song, it always ends up as some kinda love thing
    i started playing sumthing on guitar today that sounded pretty good, ill have to work on it abit tommorrow and i'll try and post it as soon as its done.... but yeh writing lyrics is hard for me atm.
  2. Okay, a side project that the band that I'm in has is "The Chocolate Honkies." I was going for a walk earlier today and I looked up at the sky. I noticed that a cloud looked a little bit like a UFO, and said "that's an enigma." I went home and put this together in about an hour lmao.

    Extraterrestrial Enigmas

    Extraterrestrial enigmas in my head
    Extraterrestrial enigmas cloud the atmosphere
    They are enigmas!
    What? What?
    They are enigmas!
    They are enigmas!
    Extraterrestrial enigmas fill my mind
    Corrupting my cognition is what I find
    They are enigmas!
    What? What?
    They are enigmas!
    They are enigmas!
    Extraterrestrial enigmas fill my head

    I shot this after three practice runs, so you can hear a few mistakes. Plus, my vocals sound hoarse because of my sore throat, unfortunately. Anyway, I love it and here you go!



  3. Originally posted by U2Nick:Okay, a side project that the band that I'm in has is "The Chocolate Honkies." I was going for a walk earlier today and I looked up at the sky. I noticed that a cloud looked a little bit like a UFO, and said "that's an enigma." I went home and put this together in about an hour lmao.

    Extraterrestrial Enigmas

    Extraterrestrial enigmas in my head
    Extraterrestrial enigmas cloud the atmosphere
    They are enigmas!
    What? What?
    They are enigmas!
    They are enigmas!
    Extraterrestrial enigmas fill my mind
    Corrupting my cognition is what I find
    They are enigmas!
    What? What?
    They are enigmas!
    They are enigmas!
    Extraterrestrial enigmas fill my head

    I shot this after three practice runs, so you can hear a few mistakes. Plus, my vocals sound hoarse because of my sore throat, unfortunately. Anyway, I love it and here you go!

    [YouTube Video]




    I've never been able to write really out there stuff like that, nothing more than melodies and simple chords on guitar and all that...and that's amazing.

    Also, I want your shirt. So bad.

  4. Originally posted by EyesWithPrideB3:[..]

    I've never been able to write really out there stuff like that, nothing more than melodies and simple chords on guitar and all that...and that's amazing.

    Also, I want your shirt. So bad.




    It's not a serious song, it's for my comedy side project lol. But thanks

    I'll email it to you.


  5. I understand its not the most serious, but still, to be comprehensive enough to work with those heavy sounds coming out of that synth, using them the right way, and not just being downright obnoxious, is something that takes skill whether or not it takes effort.
  6. Originally posted by EyesWithPrideB3:[..]

    I understand its not the most serious, but still, to be comprehensive enough to work with those heavy sounds coming out of that synth, using them the right way, and not just being downright obnoxious, is something that takes skill whether or not it takes effort.


    Thanks man. I'm sure that you could do it as well, I don't have any experience using a piano. I could not even tell you the chords that I used during the song lol. Again, thanks.
  7. Originally posted by U2Nick:[..]

    Thanks man. I'm sure that you could do it as well, I don't have any experience using a piano. I could not even tell you the chords that I used during the song lol. Again, thanks.


    Haha no problem

    And I would have to agree, I guess I know the feeling- I'll be sitting there just goofing around, finding something I really like on the guitar and just crafting it to myself, when someone will look over and go, "Hey man, what key is it in? Tell me the roots of the chords"

    And I'm like....
  8. Originally posted by EyesWithPrideB3:[..]

    Haha no problem

    And I would have to agree, I guess I know the feeling- I'll be sitting there just goofing around, finding something I really like on the guitar and just crafting it to myself, when someone will look over and go, "Hey man, what key is it in? Tell me the roots of the chords"

    And I'm like....


    Exactly. That's why I don't like to play guitar around people that are not good friends of mine lol. At school, I have plenty of opportunities to play, but every other person who plays would ask me those questions. Plus, they would always want to "jam" or "talk about the pros." People who play guitar suck.
  9. Originally posted by U2Nick:[..]

    Exactly. That's why I don't like to play guitar around people that are not good friends of mine lol. At school, I have plenty of opportunities to play, but every other person who plays would ask me those questions. Plus, they would always want to "jam" or "talk about the pros." People who play guitar suck.


    Haha TOTALLY agree. People will be like, "I'm gonna play blues in C"

    And I just sort of blankly stare, and I'm like...."I'm gonna play whatever comes out of this thing, but if YOU play first, I can make it sound good over whatever "key" you're in."

    Not that I don't know what a key is- was in concert band for something like 6 years and took 2 years of guitar lessons- I just play
  10. Originally posted by EyesWithPrideB3:[..]

    Haha TOTALLY agree. People will be like, "I'm gonna play blues in C"

    And I just sort of blankly stare, and I'm like...."I'm gonna play whatever comes out of this thing, but if YOU play first, I can make it sound good over whatever "key" you're in."

    Not that I don't know what a key is- was in concert band for something like 6 years and took 2 years of guitar lessons- I just play


    Exactly... nobody cares about what key a song is in. And if they do, they are a dick.

    Anyway, a bit more on topic, I have a song in mind, a cool "jazzy' song. The title I have in mind is "Eccentric Mob." The only chords that I have in mind so far are C#m, E, B, A and Abm. I also have another title in mind, "Life Sized Action Man." (hopefully this got us back on topic lol)
  11. As promised:

    The verses are written in lines of three, for the rhyme scheme, in case you're confused.

    Tentatively titled..."The Most Unabashed Pop Tune Since 'The Sweetest Thing'"

    [Verse I]
    32 minutes
    Maybe thirty one and a half
    Until I hit the stairs
    I been hidin' 'hind the notion
    That if I don't make it,
    Somehow, I won't care

    It won't happen this time, I think,
    As I make my climb
    And the doorways slam
    But I pray that I'm wrong,
    And maybe there is a God,
    Cause I always am

    preformatted:

    My world stops for a second or two,
    Every time I see you...

    [Chorus]
    Then every day, I hit the landing
    Catch her eye, it's a wonder I'm still standing
    And she smiles...
    Maybe it's a reaction to a smile of mine
    I won't try to hide it, I don't have time
    Now, just like every day, the moment shatters
    And we walk away

    [Verse II]
    Never wondering if I'm right or wrong
    Just strollin' along, just strollin' along
    'Til I sit down, and damn, I'm trapped again
    I gotta let go, release the clutch
    I think maybe I think too much
    Stop worryin' about the why, and remember the when

    preformatted:

    And I dream of 8:59
    For the moment that you're mine...

    [Chorus]

    [Bridge]
    The less time I spend trying to see myself in your eyes
    The longer I can look at you with mine
    And you'll never know that this is your song
    17 minutes til I'm right where I belong...

    [Alternate Chorus]
    Like every day, I hit the landing
    But we both stop, it's a wonder I'm still standing,
    And we smile...

    [Chorus]

    [Outro Verse]
    4 more hours til I see her again
    Maybe more like 3 and a half
    Im caught up conversation,
    But I can't help breaking to watch her pass
    She tries to hide as she's looking around
    Maybe someday she'll know I believe in what I've already found...
    And we'll smile

  12. Originally posted by U2Nick:[..]

    Exactly... nobody cares about what key a song is in. And if they do, they are a dick.

    Anyway, a bit more on topic, I have a song in mind, a cool "jazzy' song. The title I have in mind is "Eccentric Mob." The only chords that I have in mind so far are C#m, E, B, A and Abm. I also have another title in mind, "Life Sized Action Man." (hopefully this got us back on topic lol)


    Can't wait to hear/read it!