1. Pretty cool Jeff sounds funky. If I wasn't in bed right now I'd be jigging to it.
    Originally posted by EyesWithPrideB3:http://soundcloud.com/mattieg/sonic

    Tentatively titled "Sonic", just fooling around earlier and ended up liking it. (my favorite part of the entire thing was actually a mistake that sounded really cool after haha )

    So yeah, any listeners?!

    It still needs a solo over the huge opening at the end- gonna track that tomorrow morning when I have time to really sit down and write one- the rest of the song was just improv tonight. Hope to add a few little synth-y soundscapes here and there too. Very minimal, but to add flavor. And I'd keep this one instrumental.

    Sounds cool, reminds me a bit of the Doctor Who theme tune if you're familiar with that, but heavy and gritty.
  2. Originally posted by EyesWithPrideB3:[..]

    Very cool Jeff, really like the flavor you're getting from the amp. Sounds like some kickass 60s fuzz-garage rock...almost like a modern(er) Velvet Underground.


    This sounds cool... it´s like Mysterious Ways mixed with RH´s Bodysnatchers!!!
  3. 'Creaks'

    Little box got rolled down the stairs.
    Little box gotta handle with care.

    This house representing, sum of fears and need.
    Everything falls apart for all to see.

    See how I run away from here.
    See how I run away from here, tripping laces.

    This place is a maze.
    I punch through the walls.
    This place is a maze
    whispers echo round the halls.

    There is a shadow, underneath my bed.
    There is a shadow, inside my head.
    My fists are bloodied, from the words that you said.
    My fists are bloodied, from the words that you said.

    Open up the window, scattering little footsteps
    Open up the door, here come the missteps.

    Here come the missteps.
  4. 'Broken Wings'

    I know you're out there somewhere, I can feel you breathing.
    This compass of silver dust inside of me speaks aloud.
    And somewhere inside this womb of mind where you only you confide,
    The sweetest dreams of you dance under cerulean blue lights.

    Having just endured the thunder, I have no strength to cast my flight.

    I cannot fly with broken wings so it is from the ground I sing,
    that through darkness I will find you and with my heart I'll let you see.
    I will now walk in star cut paths refrain, as I'm calling out your name.

    Through this darkness I will find you
    and with my heart I'll set yours free.

    And the mountains I have climbed in ecstasy and anguish.
    They were mountains climbed, just to see your face.
    The climbers strife carves a chamber of echo's in my life.
    But nothing,here, could have more meaning than this summit

    I cannot fly with broken wings so it is from the ground I sing,
    that through darkness I will find you and with my heart I'll let you see.
    I will now walk in star cut paths refrain, as I'm calling out your name.

    Through this darkness I will find you
    and with my heart I'll set yours free.

    This journey's end has come, now I feel as one.
    With you the spirits are neither spectral nor fleeting.
    In you they find a home, a heavenly dome.
    To this life, and the next you keep me, connected.

    Tonight, my love.
    Here I am.

    Tonight, my love.
    Here I am.

    Tonight, my love
    I am.

    I am.
  5. That one looks like a mix of your own style, Streets, Still Haven't Found and a little bit of October (album) thrown in there... and I obviously like it
  6. Here are a few songs I've written and one that The Verve wrote

    - Don't Lead Me Me Blindly
    - Letters From Home
    - Middle Of The Night
    BitterSweet Symphony - The Verve

    Hope you like it!

    Fixed...had the wrong link for The Verve song
  7. Pretty new to song writing, but I like this one a good deal


    You look in my direction, ask "What the hell is wrong with me?"
    I wanna tell you somethin' but it just ain't meant to be
    I try to keep it secret but that won't come easily
    But if I could tell you somethin' it would be

    Girl you're beautiful, in every single way
    Girl you're beautiful, don't make no mistake
    If I could have you here beside me from last night until today
    I'd treasure every moment, wouldn't let it get away

    I don't know how you got here I mean who the hell is he?
    To tell you that you're nothin, he must be blind cause he can't see
    Whats put out there before him i'm assumin' he don't know
    But if he doesn't see what I see let him go

    Cause girl you're beautiful, in every single way
    Girl you're beautiful, don't make no mistake
    If I could have you here beside me from last night until today
    I'd treasure every moment, wouldn't let it get away

    And i'll try always to never let you down
    Take your heart up in my hands and carry it around
    but I promise its no burden and I promise its no chore
    cause every little thing that you do has got me floored

    Cause girl you're beautiful, in every single way
    Girl you're beautiful, don't make no mistake
    If I could have you here beside me from last night until today
    I'd treasure every moment, wouldn't let it get away

    Girl you're beautiful, I love you more than I can say.
  8. I like it! Maybe a few more verses though?

    Oh, and I could probably put a few ideas I have in here too...


  9. Thanks!! I'll probably write a few more soon.



    I wrote an intro (like the music) for the song, and i'm excited to say its coming along nicely! This is the first song i've ever worked on and i'm hoping it comes out good enough to play for a certain someone
  10. Haha, "a certain someone", I wonder what kind of person that would be... Good luck!

    I wrote a song like that for someone special a few weeks ago