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  1. Beautiful and sad!

    Today we shall see if I can finish some song...
  2. Will post here tonight...I have 2 new songs, one is about as political as I've ever gotten and will probably ever get, and the other is a perfect album closer, sort of the slow-burning grandiose that "Run" by Snow Patrol is.

    You may wait in anticipation til then
  3. It's tonight in Sweden

    I may post something tomorrow
  4. Originally posted by EyesWithPrideB3:Will post here tonight...I have 2 new songs, one is about as political as I've ever gotten and will probably ever get, and the other is a perfect album closer, sort of the slow-burning grandiose that "Run" by Snow Patrol is.

    You may wait in anticipation til then




    Waiting...



  6. "Bottle Rocket"

    These words may not do you the justice
    That your shades of mock disinterest can
    Take a drag off your last cigarette
    Roll your eyes again
    -
    Light me up, watch us fly,
    Dedicate it to the sky
    By the light of the moon I write
    To you tonight
    -
    [Short Chorus]
    Sparks shower like kisses from stars
    Dance with me tonight
    Half empty glances only go so far
    Dance with me tonight
    -
    Questions laced with confidence
    Masked by your Audrey Hepburn smile
    Ignite the fuse, burn it away
    Lets ride the darkness for awhile
    -
    [Long Chorus]
    Sparks shower like kisses from stars
    Dance with me tonight
    Half empty glances only go so far
    Dance with me tonight
    And when the sun comes up, we'll lay it down
    Dance with me tonight
    Just let me be the one to be around
    Dance with me tonight
    -
    [Bridge]
    Cut me some slack
    I'm under attack
    She's a dead soul stealer
    An ordinary healer
    She's taken my mind;
    I don't want it back
    -
    Place your hand in mine
    Walk the thin white line
    You know your worth down to the cent
    And it shows
    This is what I want you to know
    -
    [Long Chorus]
    Dance with me tonight (x?)
  7. This one's not done. It's a little unconventional I guess.

    Unto You

    Let me take you
    To the
    Burning pilots
    Of the
    Fallen planes
    Over oceans dry
    I'll forsake you
    With your
    Vocal pretention
    Fuels your deaf acceptance
    And your colorblind eyes
    -
    [PreChorus]
    Can't see the blood
    Stained the water
    Stained the ground
    Stained the altar
    -
    [Chorus]
    War, unto each other
    One unto a few
    What does glory hold?
    Once unto you
  8. Nice ones! Really like the "Cut me some slack"-part
  9. I've fallen absolutely in love with the unconventional-ness of Unto You. I want need that song to be finished NOW.
  10. Okay... any feedback/thoughts on this?

    Somebody to save my heart:

    I'm sitting here in a lonely room,
    waiting for you to save my heart
    If you don't come here and save my heart,
    what will happen to me?

    I want somebody to save my heart
    I need somebody to save my heart
    There's only one who could save my heart
    That somebody who could save my heart
    That somebody is you

    I'm stuck here
    In a land of oblivion
    I'm trying not to remember
    what's on the other side of that wall
    Trying to forget
    the light... of love

    I'm trying to get up but these chains
    have me down on my knees
    You are the person
    with the key
    The key to life
    for me

    I want somebody to save my heart
    I need somebody to save my heart
    There's only one who could save my heart
    That somebody who could save my heart
    That somebody is you

    There is no other
    way out of this place
    The only way out of this
    place is through you

    I want somebody to save my heart
    I need somebody to save my heart
    There's only one who could save my heart
    That somebody who could save my heart
    That somebody is you

    I'll be saved
  11. Originally posted by Mr_Trek:Okay... any feedback/thoughts on this?

    Somebody to save my heart:

    I'm sitting here in a lonely room,
    waiting for you to save my heart
    If you don't come here and save my heart,
    what will happen to me?

    I want somebody to save my heart
    I need somebody to save my heart
    There's only one who could save my heart
    That somebody who could save my heart
    That somebody is you

    I'm stuck here
    In a land of oblivion
    I'm trying not to remember
    what's on the other side of that wall
    Trying to forget
    the light... of love

    I'm trying to get up but these chains
    have me down on my knees
    You are the person
    with the key
    The key to life
    for me

    I want somebody to save my heart
    I need somebody to save my heart
    There's only one who could save my heart
    That somebody who could save my heart
    That somebody is you

    There is no other
    way out of this place
    The only way out of this
    place is through you

    I want somebody to save my heart
    I need somebody to save my heart
    There's only one who could save my heart
    That somebody who could save my heart
    That somebody is you

    I'll be saved

    I like; straight-up, raw and emotive
  12. Trek: Looks like a great lyric to me. Sort of like Harry says...raw.
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