Originally posted by drewhiggins:
You Make Your Days. Cool title. You could also bracket the (You) part.
You Make My Days is the title

The solution to singing off key is singing more, you'll get better

Thanks for the compliments on my lyrics!

Originally posted by drewhiggins:
You Make Your Days. Cool title. You could also bracket the (You) part.
S'il vous plaît, kiss 'yo ass goodbye, mi culah passhinn, yeah YEAH yeah yeah YEAHHHHHH!!!!
Sweet almond eyes on my velvet pumpkin to have you all to my self. Oh YEAH I'm getting fuckin' nailed for this.
My bright fright fuckin' light is burning bright....OH yeah and that's a headspin for that....FUck man.
I'm hitting 'cha mitten for my bitten lemon-squittin' frittin'!!!
Now is the time to buy easter eggs! Yesshir!!!
Originally posted by drewhiggins:You may as well use earlier inspiration - Bono does. (Levitate - Miracle Drug).
I'm heading off for a few minutes, feeling a bit sick so just gotta go something.
Originally posted by Mr_Trek:[..]
Ok... I'm writing... just finished the second verse I think.
I'll see ya when your back then!![]()
Originally posted by drewhiggins:Parts I can read, others I can't. It's like that old 1800s-style handwriting, the very nice type.
As long as you can read it....
Originally posted by drewhiggins:That's good - I can see parts on there that are interesting and what I can read, could take on a real edge and interesting thoughts from it.
I usually write neat enough but when I'm writing a note or thinking of lyrics, I write them very quickly. I think when I was working I wrote a few lyrics (that never went anywhere) and you could tell I was just scribbling things down, or writing stories when I was waiting for some help.