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  1. I need to get a band again lol, you guys are inspiring me. I've been working on a solo EP for quite some time, maybe once songs are done I'll post them here, but for now I miss playing with other people. Luckily my friends and I are jamming tomorrow night!
  2. There hasn't been a post in here in quite some time... since my last post, I've completed quite a few things and started work on an EP for a side project that I'm doing with my friend Rob (bass / piano of Impetus). The EP is titled "Obscurities." I got the idea when I said this to my friend Curtis: "Obscurities are the truth in it's purest form." I really liked that and went with it...

    But the Impetus songs are the ones that I've completed the most work on. I'll only show you guys the last two, as it would just be a whole mess in here if I posted everything.

    Dream of Brilliance (working title, I'll most likely change it)

    Hidden thoughts from all the world
    Collide to make a damaged soul
    How could life be a droll omage?
    What is a problem without a cause?
    We’re spinning lightly out of control

    It’s beautiful
    It’s beautiful

    If there is a scar that proves useful
    If there is a hole that proves to fulfill
    When there is a moment that isn’t wasted
    When there is a battle that doesn’t cause fear

    It’s beautiful
    It’s beautiful

    When life begins, to look like this
    Your head begins to forget the list
    Of reasons why, you’re so unwell

    It’s beautiful
    It’s beautiful

    If there is a scar that proves useful
    If there is a hole that proves to fulfill
    When there is a moment that isn’t wasted
    When there is a battle that doesn’t cause fear

    It’s beautiful
    It’s beautiful

    Dreams begin, so safe from sin
    Time is stuck, we’re so star struck
    Rules unwind, secrets confined, to the sinner inside
    We’re drifting slowly out of control
    We’re spinning lightly out of control


    This is a very light, slow tune. It emanates a dreamy, "floaty" feeling. The next song is also light, but in a different way. It has a slow jazz feeling, but it still carries out a passionate "rockier" feeling towards the end, before the closing choruses.

    Fragile Perfection

    In this utopian perfection, lives a single corruption
    But what we see is hiding, all who suffer for striving
    It’s time for a new perspective, on what was falsely superlative

    What if God was silenced? Why would we bother for guidance?
    Where do I go for judgment, without a rightful providence?
    Our hearts are quick for soundness, but what does hope provide us?

    You are my
    Fragile perfection
    You justify
    All of my transgressions

    With all the blues, and all the wrong, comes a life of riddles and cues
    A heart with life, a heart with song, a heart with endless strife
    But brilliance always wins, in a world of unspoken sins

    You’re all of the jubilation, that’s causing my heart’s inflation
    You are the sweetest temptation, for the hearts of sin’s creations
    There is no time for patience; we just need to achieve something that makes us

    You are my
    Fragile perfection
    You’ve caused all
    Of my exhilaration

    You are my
    Fragile perfection
    You justify
    All of my transgressions
  3. Originally posted by WojBhoy:I'm in the midst of recording some stuff right now, should have it ready soon, just wanted to pick the brains of ye fair folk on some additional lyrics I've put together for the stuff I posted the other day.

    [Song 1]

    And now here comes that time again
    When day passes to night
    When the now becomes transformed to then
    In the wait of the dawning light
    With every sunrise I can see
    This world burst into life
    Throw away missed opportunities
    To the touchpaper, set 'light

    [instrumental break/hook]

    The future could be bright if we
    Just took our chance and ran
    Down the roads that we could take today
    Throw away the masterplan
    I've wanted to walk these paths before
    In dreams I walked alone
    Look into these eyes and take my hand
    This heart is as your own

    [instrumental break/hook]

    [middle 8]

    Never rest and never stay
    In a past we cannot change
    Turn moments into memories
    Let burn the greatest flame
    Chase the stars across the skies
    To the sunset of our lives
    Hold high the light of hope again
    The world awaits tonight

    [instrumental break/hook]

    I toyed with the idea of swapping the 2nd and 3rd verses but having finished what is for now the 3rd verse, that's what I have. Thoughts?

    Right. I posted this sodding ages ago, finally got 'round to recording a version. I'll warn you all, my mp3 player doesn't like recording my piano, so don't listen to it at too high a volume lol. If it was a bootleg I'd say 2-2.5 star quality when I start hitting the keys, which is really pissing me off 'cause I've gone through it so many bloody times and placed the player in different places around my front hall to try and minimise the fuzz, but to no avail. However, it's a demo so it's kind of expected, and I just wanted to share it with you guys to give you an idea of what I had come up with.

    Couple of things, there's one or two minor lyric changes, and I mean minor, like the odd line, and I'm thinking of naming the song either 'Sunset' or 'Sunset Run', wondered if you guys had any thoughts on which might be better suited.

    And yeah, I've worked it into a ZooTV-esque segue with a cover of Running To Stand Still.



    Hope you like it.

    http://www.mediafire.com/?3njdzjjymhcvunk

    EDIT -


    It would appear you have beaten me to the punch in re-opening this thread Mr Quiggs lol. Liking the lyrics m'man particularly the first song, it gives me a very Velvet Dress-ish vibe.
  4. Funny how opinions differ, I like much more the second one, sounds more deep - I like it A LOT. Does it have music yet, Nick?
  5. Thanks Harry! You're cover of RTSS was wonderful, you showcased your rich baritone. Sunset Run segued perfectly, and really flipped the emotion on it's head. When you started singing, I was reminded of a fresh pot of coffee, if that makes sense. The lyrics and music are good, so don't worry about the recording quality. Do you have a regular digital camera? I use mine for recording keyboard bits, and it records the sound almost perfectly. It's an HP from 2007, and it would work perfectly for recording a little demo like Sunset Run.


    Thanks Sergio, and I agree, I actually like Fragile Perfection more as well. I do have music for it, I'll record something very soon. It's the same chords / organ riff throughout the entire song, so I'll most likely record just a 30 second clip with a verse or something. Thanks for the interest.

    The chords are Ebm, Db, Abm, B (Em, D, Am, C played on a guitar tuned to Eb is how I play it... even though there won't be guitar chords in the song... lol) I also have little licks, since it is a jazzy tune.
  6. Whoa, that first song, Nick....I mean, that's got to be the best thing you've written in a long, long time. That was just awesome.

    I love the second one, too, and actually read that one first as I saw Sergio's comment that he loved it way more...and I was like "Oh, I'll HAVE to side with him on this one- that was so good"...and then I scrolled up and was like...those are lyrics I would quote and put up on a bulletin board in my room, for real. That's awesome stuff.
  7. Originally posted by WojBhoy:[..]
    Right. I posted this sodding ages ago, finally got 'round to recording a version. I'll warn you all, my mp3 player doesn't like recording my piano, so don't listen to it at too high a volume lol. If it was a bootleg I'd say 2-2.5 star quality when I start hitting the keys, which is really pissing me off 'cause I've gone through it so many bloody times and placed the player in different places around my front hall to try and minimise the fuzz, but to no avail. However, it's a demo so it's kind of expected, and I just wanted to share it with you guys to give you an idea of what I had come up with.

    Couple of things, there's one or two minor lyric changes, and I mean minor, like the odd line, and I'm thinking of naming the song either 'Sunset' or 'Sunset Run', wondered if you guys had any thoughts on which might be better suited.

    And yeah, I've worked it into a ZooTV-esque segue with a cover of Running To Stand Still.



    Hope you like it.

    http://www.mediafire.com/?3njdzjjymhcvunk

    EDIT -

    [..]
    It would appear you have beaten me to the punch in re-opening this thread Mr Quiggs lol. Liking the lyrics m'man particularly the first song, it gives me a very Velvet Dress-ish vibe.


    This would be a live masterpiece, Harry. The two of these songs together...it's beautiful.
  8. Sorry for somewhat of a triple post, but this is probably the best place to put this, as it is news of my band...and we share band news here, don't we? Believe we have in the past.

    Incognito Burrito, my summer band that plays graduation parties throughout the season, has another show on Saturday! We're super excited, here is the set!

    Sirius (Chicago Bulls Intro Music)- The Alan Parsons Project
    Gay Bar- Electric Six
    When I Come Around- Green Day
    All Day and All of the Night- The Kinks
    Interstate Love Song- Stone Temple Pilots
    The Middle- Jimmy Eat World
    Seven Nation Army- The White Stripes
    Chapter 4- Avenged Sevenfold (I'm not really pleased about this, but it was specially requested by the kid hosting the party)
    Glycerine- Bush
    Search and Destroy- Iggy and the Stooges
    Break on Through to the Other Side- The Doors
    I Love Rock n' Roll- Joan Jett & The Blackhearts
    Blitzkreig Bop- The Ramones
    Summer of '69- Bryan Adams
    Surrender- Cheap Trick
    Song 2- Blur

    Our next two shows will have "Where the Streets Have No Name" and "Beautiful Day" in them, but those aren't quite ready for Saturday. Our drummer is shocked at how difficult/original the drumming is for Streets...almost entirely on the toms!
  9. Originally posted by EyesWithPrideB3:Whoa, that first song, Nick....I mean, that's got to be the best thing you've written in a long, long time. That was just awesome.

    I love the second one, too, and actually read that one first as I saw Sergio's comment that he loved it way more...and I was like "Oh, I'll HAVE to side with him on this one- that was so good"...and then I scrolled up and was like...those are lyrics I would quote and put up on a bulletin board in my room, for real. That's awesome stuff.


    Thanks Matt, I also feel that these are possibly the best things that I've done so far. Thanks!

    Wow (about the bulletin board comment), thanks! That's really cool, I just imagined you listening to your iPod (with an Impetus cover art showing), getting up a writing it down. I just got a "butterflies in my stomach" feeling lol...

    Anyway, here is a video with the "Fragile Perfection" music that I said that I would record. Notice the birds chirping and the pajamas that I'm wearing at 4:00 pm.

  10. Originally posted by EyesWithPrideB3:Sorry for somewhat of a triple post, but this is probably the best place to put this, as it is news of my band...and we share band news here, don't we? Believe we have in the past.

    Incognito Burrito, my summer band that plays graduation parties throughout the season, has another show on Saturday! We're super excited, here is the set!

    Sirius (Chicago Bulls Intro Music)- The Alan Parsons Project
    Gay Bar- Electric Six
    When I Come Around- Green Day
    All Day and All of the Night- The Kinks
    Interstate Love Song- Stone Temple Pilots
    The Middle- Jimmy Eat World
    Seven Nation Army- The White Stripes
    Chapter 4- Avenged Sevenfold (I'm not really pleased about this, but it was specially requested by the kid hosting the party)
    Glycerine- Bush
    Search and Destroy- Iggy and the Stooges
    Break on Through to the Other Side- The Doors
    I Love Rock n' Roll- Joan Jett & The Blackhearts
    Blitzkreig Bop- The Ramones
    Summer of '69- Bryan Adams
    Surrender- Cheap Trick
    Song 2- Blur

    Our next two shows will have "Where the Streets Have No Name" and "Beautiful Day" in them, but those aren't quite ready for Saturday. Our drummer is shocked at how difficult/original the drumming is for Streets...almost entirely on the toms!


    Of course, this is where I exclusively spam the internet with my band stuff.

    As I've said before, it's a really cool setlist. It will get people going, and that's exactly what they want in the Summer. I wish you guys the very best of luck with both rehearsing and performing!! Actually, I've always though that Blitzkrieg Bop would be a good closer... idk, just a thought of mine.
  11. Originally posted by LikeASong:Funny how opinions differ, I like much more the second one, sounds more deep - I like it A LOT. Does it have music yet, Nick?

    Originally posted by U2Nick:Thanks Harry! You're cover of RTSS was wonderful, you showcased your rich baritone. Sunset Run segued perfectly, and really flipped the emotion on it's head. When you started singing, I was reminded of a fresh pot of coffee, if that makes sense. The lyrics and music are good, so don't worry about the recording quality. Do you have a regular digital camera? I use mine for recording keyboard bits, and it records the sound almost perfectly. It's an HP from 2007, and it would work perfectly for recording a little demo like Sunset Run.

    Ha, well, someone has to represent the other side (i.e. preferring Fragile Perfection), glad you seem to like it though! can't say I quite get the fresh pot of coffee comparison but I'll take it lol I don't have a camera unfortunately - I might look into getting an 8-track, my housemate at uni. has one and gets decent quality recoridngs on that

    Thankyou m'man believe me, I want to get a band together so I can try and realise the possibilities but it's difficult trying to find like-minded people where you know it just works. But I shall prevail! Either that or just work out a one-man-band solo-rig lol...
    Originally posted by U2Nick:Thanks Matt, I also feel that these are possibly the best things that I've done so far. Thanks!

    Wow (about the bulletin board comment), thanks! That's really cool, I just imagined you listening to your iPod (with an Impetus cover art showing), getting up a writing it down. I just got a "butterflies in my stomach" feeling lol...

    Anyway, here is a video with the "Fragile Perfection" music that I said that I would record. Notice the birds chirping and the pajamas that I'm wearing at 4:00 pm.

    [YouTube Video]

    Ha, love the style matey lol like the basic structure, it's got promise I feel your pain where intriguing acoustics are concerned...I've had my fair share of weird things happen lol.
  12. Originally posted by WojBhoy:
    [..]
    Ha, well, someone has to represent the other side (i.e. preferring Fragile Perfection), glad you seem to like it though! can't say I quite get the fresh pot of coffee comparison but I'll take it lol I don't have a camera unfortunately - I might look into getting an 8-track, my housemate at uni. has one and gets decent quality recoridngs on that

    [..]
    Ha, love the style matey lol like the basic structure, it's got promise I feel your pain where intriguing acoustics are concerned...I've had my fair share of weird things happen lol.


    What I meant was, I pictured a sunrise, a fresh start or something along those lines when the singing began. That feeling you get when you wake up feeling well. That sounds good, whatever works.

    Thanks! Yes lol, I always have either a bird's chirp or a dog's bark. How the camera picks up my birds' chirping is astounding; either the camera is extremely sensitive to high pitched chirps, or my hallway has incredible acoustics. The birds are located in my kitchen area, which is separated from my room by an eight foot long hallway. lol
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